♦ August 18, 2008
♦ 6 Comments
Kernels of kibble
Carried away one by one
As if precious gold
Kernels? I love it! Ab-so-oot-ee love it. Oh you did not intend that corn reference? Well that’s ok. Dozed off watching Transformers. Dang I need sleep. Going to bed without a workout. Which I hate. But I need some rest. Dang schedule. Bring on that four day weekend.
Asleep before ten
From the couch I rise
Off to my sleep number bed.
That was my first haiku. At least I think that was a haiku.
Ahhhh I need sleep. g’night
well done, padwan. though i myself am from the 5-7-5 school of bad haiku, i believe yours is indeed one as well! now rest! i hear you are close to completing the first “banana splits ON DEMAND” bundle for the greater plains states..
Jeffs rhyme broke the rules
yet captures the lack of sleep
so credit still due
Still I must wonder
Can haiku have three stanzas?
if not, more broke rules.
Out of surgery,
the cat judges which rhyme works
wearing plastic cone
wow. a haiku saga in 4 parts. this should be studied by all as the great work from a haiku master!!!!!
doc, your a poet and i didn’t know it!!
the cone parts hurts a little.. its more of a …a… turtle neck
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